Wow. I haven't posted a teaser in SOOO long, you guys. But I've written a lot lately and thought I'd share a short snippet. :) The MC, Andrina, is battling with herself about being in Valyad. She knows she's in too deep. And THAT is when things start to get interesting. :D
*SNIP* Thanks for stopping by! :))
ooh I liked it. So much angst but in a good (rather than annoying) way. I can imagine how crappy it must feel to live in her world.
ReplyDeleteooohh! nice tease...I so want to know what happened in the past...that day that she was supposed to die. more please!
ReplyDeleteYayyy I've missed your teases. That last paragraph is so killer. The voice is amazing :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I love that such a short piece elicited such a melancholy response from me. Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteOoo, very nice tease, now I want more :P "They soared directly into our city, knowing they’d demolish memories caught between four walls." Loved that line especially!
ReplyDeleteI love teasers that have me begging for more. You delivered!
ReplyDeleteWhat striking snippet, especially the last line. Definitely curious as to what happened! Well done :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing in this. =D That last line really made me want to know more.
ReplyDeleteGreat tease--I totally want to read more, you evil wench! :) What a great hint of your MC's fascinating world in such a short snip!
ReplyDeleteWhat Deb and Kristin said. The last paragraph was like a little gut shot. Nice work, Bex.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the last paragraph. This was a great snippet! Oh, and I love the name Legora.
ReplyDeleteAs has been said, love the last paragraph, and love the angst!
ReplyDeleteGood emotion in a short span
ReplyDeleteI like the emotion. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI loved it! Especially this line, "stars blasted our home into toothpick-sized fragments."
ReplyDeleteWow, srsly awesome tease. I love it! This is such a cool WIP :D
ReplyDeleteYour teaser packs an emotional punch, no matter how small it is. Fab. Loved it
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