Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

Wow. I haven't posted a teaser in SOOO long, you guys. But I've written a lot lately and thought I'd share a short snippet. :) The MC, Andrina, is battling with herself about being in Valyad. She knows she's in too deep. And THAT is when things start to get interesting. :D


*SNIP*   Thanks for stopping by! :))

17 comments:

  1. ooh I liked it. So much angst but in a good (rather than annoying) way. I can imagine how crappy it must feel to live in her world.

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  2. ooohh! nice tease...I so want to know what happened in the past...that day that she was supposed to die. more please!

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  3. Yayyy I've missed your teases. That last paragraph is so killer. The voice is amazing :)

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  4. Oh, I love that such a short piece elicited such a melancholy response from me. Great excerpt.

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  5. Ooo, very nice tease, now I want more :P "They soared directly into our city, knowing they’d demolish memories caught between four walls." Loved that line especially!

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  6. I love teasers that have me begging for more. You delivered!

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  7. What striking snippet, especially the last line. Definitely curious as to what happened! Well done :)

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  8. Beautiful writing in this. =D That last line really made me want to know more.

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  9. Great tease--I totally want to read more, you evil wench! :) What a great hint of your MC's fascinating world in such a short snip!

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  10. What Deb and Kristin said. The last paragraph was like a little gut shot. Nice work, Bex.

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  11. I really liked the last paragraph. This was a great snippet! Oh, and I love the name Legora.

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  12. As has been said, love the last paragraph, and love the angst!

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  13. Good emotion in a short span

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  14. I loved it! Especially this line, "stars blasted our home into toothpick-sized fragments."

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  15. Wow, srsly awesome tease. I love it! This is such a cool WIP :D

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  16. Your teaser packs an emotional punch, no matter how small it is. Fab. Loved it

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