Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

I haven't played in a couple of weeks, but I've kept busy writing and felt like posting a snippet today.

This is the night before Andrina begins her journey to meet the King of the New World. :D




*SNIP* Thanks for stopping by! :)

25 comments:

  1. Convince the King of what? I SOOO want to know! Great tease.

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  2. Very, very interesting. I want so much more of your WiP :))
    Right blend of internal monologue and dialogue. I like it!!

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  3. Pretty! I like the end, especially :)

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  4. OMG, I would be so nervous. Sounds like something big is up. I'm also curious about the King ;) And ick for cloudy/rainy weather.

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  5. *sighs* Just so you know, I heart this. Wonderful, beautifully written snip!

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  6. Ooh, I want to be whisked off to a world full of young men wanting to meet me! Must know what happens next!

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  7. Very nice! Love the last paragraph.

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  8. Awesome snip! I want to know more! Loved the last paragraph :D <3

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  9. Psh, if MC doesn't want guys fighting for her attention, I'll go for her! =) Great snip!

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  10. Ahhhhhh what's next????? You leave me hanging after the body heat paragraph...cruel! ;) LOL

    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

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  11. Great vivid imagery. Love the interaction between the two characters.

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  12. You leave me with many questions, which is good.

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  13. I feel a really real connection between these two characters without it ever actually being said. Nice.

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  14. great tease! I really like the atmosphere.

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  15. The end is so sweet! But I get the feeling this scene is the calm before the storm...
    Reminded me randomly of this scene in Kristin Cashore's Fire when the MC and her friend/love interest person are talking just before a big battle. :)

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  16. Convince the king of what? Come on! The suspence! Not fair. Damn you and your delicious teasers :)

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  17. Very nice dialogue. I like it so far and def want to hear some more!

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  18. Ahh, this is so good! I love the tone here, the quiet of the scene and the dialogue.

    And the last paragraph is just FULL of adorable!!

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  19. I like the MC's voice. I want to know what Andy has to convince the king of. I like the name Andrina. It's cool. Is it something you made up? Your writing style is awesome, by the way.

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  20. Very intriguing. I want to know more! I also love the name Andrina. Very unusual.

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  21. LOVE <3

    I need this!!!

    Your writing, as usual, is brilliant :)

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  22. I love how spare your writing is...really gives everything that much more impact! And, the King? Gulp! :D

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  23. I like the companionable moment between these two characters. That comes from great description. :)

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  24. The dialogue also embraces the reader.

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