Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

I hit over 5k yesterday on my WIP. I'm hoping I can keep at it and finish this book by May/June. Edits and all. Yeah, I know. Sounds crazy. But it's a goal. ;)

Anyway... This is chapter four. Yep, it's definitely one of the shortest chapters you've ever read. :D


I dream of growing fat from eating too much, and sleeping long after the sun’s rays burn through white-laced curtains.

I dream of the earth, how it used to be.

Most of all, I dream that one day everyone will be happy again, and the stars will stop falling.

15 comments:

  1. Aw. Shortest chapter ever but it made me so sad. I want to read the rest of this!
    Good luck, you can finish it up by June!

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  2. Shortest chapter, yep. But still packing a lot of emotional punch, Becca

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  3. Yep, that is the shortest chapter EVER...but great! I'm getting the idea this is dystopian? Am I way out in left field?

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  4. Beautiful

    and 5k... you're a novel writing machine

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  5. Very short, but totally beautiful!

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  6. I love that it's its own chapter. Very nice! :)

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  7. This was great! Tons of emotion in so few words..that last line was really haunting! Good luck with this! :D

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  8. Lovely, lovely sentences that sort of broke my heart, a little.

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  9. Short it certainly is, but it's also beautiful. I LOVE the last line!

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  10. AND....she's back full force! This is GOOD STUFF BEX!!! I love the falling stars concept. Usually people love shooting stars...nice twist. :D

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  11. For such a short chapter, it has quite the impact! :)

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  12. She's baaaaaack! :D This is the shortest, but kick ass chapters ever! Nice work.

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