I probably won't be able to comment on anyone's until I get home from work today (it's a busy day), but I promise I will!!!
This is another part of my dystopian, and I have no idea where it's going. I mean, you'll see why in this scene. You'll probably be like wtf?
Anyway, I wanted to clarify a word before you ask what it is. The word "buffant" is used, which means, in this world, a mutation of a buffalo and an elephant. Lame, I know. But it works. XD
*SNIP*
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Love this teaser! I've got such a good feel for your MC here -- and "buffant"! Cool word, methinks. :D
ReplyDeleteI like buffant too! Totally intrigued by this!
ReplyDeleteSo cool!! I also like "buffant" :)
ReplyDeleteI am very intrigued! Awesome tease!
ReplyDeletebuffant, I think of a hairstyle. :) This is getting good, can't wait to see where you're going!
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued! Totally curious as to whats up with the gypsies!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you told me in advance what a buffant was in your world, cuz I kept thinking it was some weird retro hairstyle! Great tease...makes me want to know more
ReplyDeleteGreat teaser! Buffant, very imaginative.
ReplyDeleteHAHAHA I'm with Karla on the hairstyle=buffant thing!
ReplyDeleteKeep at it girl!
Loved this. Love it so much. Lol you know what, when I got to "buffant" I went for my dictionary, and then I got confused cos I couldn't find it in there or with google. Then I remembered you'd given us the answer before the post :D Nice one.
ReplyDeleteAwesome voice, awesome writing. LOVE THIS:
ReplyDelete"Gypsies.
A plethora of them."
It just struck me as so powerful. Lovely tease :D