Wow. It's been so long. *hugs TT* I srsly don't remember the last time I posted a snippet on here. O.o
I started that SNI. I'm only in chapter two, but it's sort of coming together. It's a dystopian. That's all I'm going to tell you. ;) Here are the first paragraphs:
*SNIP*
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Omg girl I love this. The first paragraph is like poetry. Keep going with this!
ReplyDeleteGreat exerpt!
ReplyDeletethis brings up so many questions and makes me want to know more. great snip!
ReplyDeleteJust one word: whoa. Okay, maybe two more: great stuff! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, this is gripping. Can't wait to see where it goes.
ReplyDeleteGlad to have you back in TT.
Man, this is great. Hooked me. Stars falling to the earth? I wonder what happened to the world you've created!
ReplyDeleteI'm hooked. I'm intrigued as to where this all will lead. Great Teaser!
ReplyDeleteYYAAAYYYYY BEX TEASED! WOOT!
ReplyDeleteThis is very dark. Love it.
So sad. I feel bad for your MC. I have tons of questions! What happened to the world? His Dad?
ReplyDeleteGreat teaser.
The world you described in the first paragraph sounds, well, frightening, in a very strange way.
ReplyDeleteI totally get your MC and I feel terrible for what she's going through.
This idea sounds great! Keep up the awesome work.
ReplyDeleteThese are great beginning paragraphs. I get such a clear sense of place, characters, and conflicts from these -- and they're also beautiful written. :]
ReplyDeleteI love reading your writing again. And yay for dystopians! This is a particularly good opening because I REALLY want to know 3 things:
ReplyDelete1. What the heck happened to the world?
2. Is her mother going to get up?
3. Will the new settlement reject them?
All of which means that I would deffffinitely read on if I found this on a shelf.
Great job! I'm curious about whether or not her mom will make it :( Awesome snip!
ReplyDeletei really, really like this. GREAT voice. GREAT writing. you're gonna go places, kid. this is good stuff.
ReplyDeleteawesome!
best of luck!!
Awesome amazing awesome :D So much of this read like poetry.
ReplyDeleteWow, Becca! That tugs at your heartstrings! I love the imagery and I definitely want to know what's going on...especially after reading that whole towns were destroyed!
ReplyDeleteWhoa, this is great, Becca! What a fabulous beginning!
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