Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!!!!!

Wow. It's been so long. *hugs TT* I srsly don't remember the last time I posted a snippet on here. O.o

I started that SNI. I'm only in chapter two, but it's sort of coming together. It's a dystopian. That's all I'm going to tell you. ;)  Here are the first paragraphs:


*SNIP*
 
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18 comments:

  1. Omg girl I love this. The first paragraph is like poetry. Keep going with this!

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  2. this brings up so many questions and makes me want to know more. great snip!

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  3. Just one word: whoa. Okay, maybe two more: great stuff! :)

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  4. Wow, this is gripping. Can't wait to see where it goes.

    Glad to have you back in TT.

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  5. Man, this is great. Hooked me. Stars falling to the earth? I wonder what happened to the world you've created!

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  6. I'm hooked. I'm intrigued as to where this all will lead. Great Teaser!

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  7. YYAAAYYYYY BEX TEASED! WOOT!

    This is very dark. Love it.

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  8. So sad. I feel bad for your MC. I have tons of questions! What happened to the world? His Dad?

    Great teaser.

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  9. The world you described in the first paragraph sounds, well, frightening, in a very strange way.
    I totally get your MC and I feel terrible for what she's going through.

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  10. This idea sounds great! Keep up the awesome work.

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  11. These are great beginning paragraphs. I get such a clear sense of place, characters, and conflicts from these -- and they're also beautiful written. :]

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  12. I love reading your writing again. And yay for dystopians! This is a particularly good opening because I REALLY want to know 3 things:

    1. What the heck happened to the world?
    2. Is her mother going to get up?
    3. Will the new settlement reject them?

    All of which means that I would deffffinitely read on if I found this on a shelf.

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  13. Great job! I'm curious about whether or not her mom will make it :( Awesome snip!

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  14. i really, really like this. GREAT voice. GREAT writing. you're gonna go places, kid. this is good stuff.

    awesome!

    best of luck!!

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  15. Awesome amazing awesome :D So much of this read like poetry.

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  16. Wow, Becca! That tugs at your heartstrings! I love the imagery and I definitely want to know what's going on...especially after reading that whole towns were destroyed!

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  17. Whoa, this is great, Becca! What a fabulous beginning!

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