Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

Well, SM's about to undergo major life-altering revisions. *hugs SM* Poor thing. It's gone through so much in the past year. Hopefully one day soon I'll be able to say, "I'm officially finished." Well, until I land an agent. XD

In the meantime, I wrote a teeny tiny bit on TC recently. So here's (part of) a scene where Chloƫ tries to convince Logan to live with her. Told from Logan's POV.



*SNIP*

Thanks for stopping by! :)

19 comments:

  1. Liquid death? Intriguing. I like how Chloe is described in this a lot.

    As for SM, I am a big fan. I'm only up to Chapter 10... but I can see it going somewhere really good. Don't be too hard on yourself. I really think it has potential :) And I want to read the revised one, okay? :D

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  2. *huggles SM too*

    This story is intriguing to me. I think I remember you saying it's horror? Kinda scared to keep reading--MEEP!

    Great snip!

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  3. I like his inner dialog a lot!

    I also can't wait to see what you do with SM!

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  4. Liquid death...I love that description! It's perfect. Nice snip

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  5. Very interesting! What an interesting MC. Not typical, which is nice!

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  6. I like the end there a lot where he sees that she's not pitying him, but really wants to help. That just feels very real to me.

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  7. I like this line: "I mean, who just sits there and watches someone shoot liquid death into their arm? It wasn’t right." I think because it's a little funny that a drug addict would say that about someone watching him do drugs. (Not "ha ha" funny, lol.) I like his character-- he seems complex.

    Also: I salute you on your SM revisions. It can be tough to make a lot of changes. But SM was awesome to start with, so I can only imagine how great it will be when you're done. Hopefully I won't have to imagine...*cough* :-D

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  8. Well - you know how I feel about SM. I love it! Ben and Candra FTW! I hope it isn't too long before you get it where you want it.

    This is really intriguing... love the liquid death line like everyone else. I love this MCs voice.

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  9. Kristin keeps stealing my comments. ;) I love the liquid death image too.

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  10. I like the voice in this too. Great interaction between the characters and interested to know what happens next!

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  11. The descriptions are very good. I already care about your MC and want to know more about him. Like how he became a drug addict in the first place. Good stuff!

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  12. Very compelling dialogue. I too loved the liquid death phrase.

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  13. "Who just sits there and watches someone shoot liquid death into their arm" - best line ever. Great teaser

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  14. Lovin' this SNI!! Liquid Death=brilliant!

    SM rocks, I huggles it! I heart Ben and Candra!! Don't give up on them, because their story needs told :)

    *Hugs*

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  15. This is intriguing :D

    *hopes to read more of TC*

    G'luck with SM :))

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  16. I love TC! And Logan's POV is so well-done!

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  17. I really can't wait til this comes back on. I felt like I was hanging at the end of the last episode.

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