I get an email from my sis this morning. She's like: OMGZ HAWT TOPIC HAZ TEAM STEFAN TEEZ. I'm like F**K STEFAN. I hate him. Srsly. I told her they better have Team Damon. Yeah, well, they do. This makes my WEEK. heheheheheheheheomgomgomg
/fangirlishness
On to the teaser!!
Okay, so the few people who have read the whole MS of SM (whoa, they're reversed) know I had to go back and fix a plot issue. Which means I decided to throw a totally new chapter into the mix. It's still not finished, but some of you may remember Maggie (crazy, witch doctor lady) from a previous TT snippet. Well, I wanted to bring her back. I think this might work out perfectly. *insert maniacal laughter here*
/fangirlishness
On to the teaser!!
Okay, so the few people who have read the whole MS of SM (whoa, they're reversed) know I had to go back and fix a plot issue. Which means I decided to throw a totally new chapter into the mix. It's still not finished, but some of you may remember Maggie (crazy, witch doctor lady) from a previous TT snippet. Well, I wanted to bring her back. I think this might work out perfectly. *insert maniacal laughter here*
*SNIP* Thanks for the comments, guys!! :)
And what does she say?!?!? Now, you have me hanging! lol...good job
ReplyDeleteLove the internal dialogue.
ReplyDeleteLove the snarkiness of both your MC and the witch.
Cool teaser :)
you tease!!! I want to know what she says!
ReplyDeleteI've said this a million times but every tease keeps me right on edge. Love this.
ReplyDeleteNice job! I really, really like this new chapter, and I can't wait to see what Maggie is going to tell her. Lots of great showing here with the setting and characters! Nice!!! I give it two thumbs up!
ReplyDeleteOMG, HOW WEIRD, the word to type in to leave this comment is CRYSTA! OOOOOHHHHHHH! LOL
Such a great voice and internal dialogues in this teaser!
ReplyDeleteLoved it <333
AHHHH - what does she SAY???? I want SM again - the new one - not the two I've already seen. K?
ReplyDeleteSqueeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I LOVE this!! The new additions you've added really makes SM shine! :D
ReplyDeleteWhen do I GET TO READ THE WHOLE THING????? Love this--your MC's snarky voice cracks me up. Plus, hello--what does she say? Way to leave us hanging...
ReplyDeleteGreat voice and I love the no-nonsense werewolf. Very nice teaser, with a cruel cliffhanger. O_O
ReplyDeleteThis is great!! I hate that you left us hanging, though! :-P
ReplyDeleteAGH! Noo! Cliff hanger! *dies* (Love the MC's snark. :D)
ReplyDeletehahaha, I love the description of the house. Great snark.
ReplyDelete"But then, she doesn’t really need one. I guess being a werewolf has its perks. "
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I love the voodoo lady - and the snark of your MC. ;)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you decided to let her go back and bring Maggie out more! Yippee!! I can't wait to read your revisions *squee*
ReplyDeleteThe decrepit place still looks like a T-Rex shit on it.<---- I spit Coke all over my screen :D Great teaser. I love, love, love the voice!
ReplyDeleteI had the... err... pleasure of meeting a voodoo priestess and the description of the house lends itself to that same, superstitious, uncomfortable feeling for your MC. I really want to know what's going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteLove this story, voice, all of it!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeleteThe decrepit place still looks like a T-Rex shit on it. - Love that line =D Can't wait to read more.
Very developed, strong voice! i love the snarkiness of it all:]
ReplyDeleteI am going to have to stop reading these teasers - they are too - teasing! Sooo... what does she say??
ReplyDeleteBTW - "the decrepit place still looks like a T-Rex shit on it." LOVE THIS LINE!
I love the T. Rex line too! I really want to know what's going on here and what she wants to stop and if the witch is going to tell her she can. Great tease!
ReplyDeleteMaggie! YES! I'm so glad she's back. Aside from loving her 'tude, I think it will be awesome for the plot. And I do love her 'tude. I also love your MCs 'tude, but you know that already. :-D
ReplyDeleteSo it sounds like you're pretty close to finishing your book. Congrats! And weren't you the one who wanted to give up on writing recently : )) Anyway, great teaser. I really liked little observations like "The decrepit place still looks like a T-Rex shit on it."
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