Awww! This is really cute!! :D
OOH, I love it! I love how she's checking him out and how he's loving it. I'm sure I'd get caught gawking at a hottie like Ben too!! Please send me the rest!
I like it! Especially the way he teases with her. Very nice way to build some tension.
Ben...*sigh* You want to take a picture? LOL! That would be embarassing!
I want to take a picture!
I love girls who get embarrassed at naked guys and the naked guys who tease them. Ah, so fun! :)
Hee! I love her awkwardness. It sort of reinforces his general hotness for me-- as in, I believe it because she reacts to it. Great!
I wouldn't mind taking a pictue ;)
Ah, I might be blushing a little. I love the girlishness that shows here that none of us ever really lose.
I don't think I got to read this. But I loved it all the while! I'm blushing just reading it :3
hehehe the awkwardness. Love it! (And love the story!)
This is usually not the kind of stuff I read, but I did enjoy reading your snippet, so that's a good thing. Keep it up! Don't give up on the writing.
This was so cute and real! I totally believed your MC's reaction to him...and he's so confident! Yum. :)
OMGOSH! CUTENESS! I loved it!
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