Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

*sighs* Haven't written anything lately, so I pulled a short snippet from SM. :)



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14 comments:

  1. OOH, I love it! I love how she's checking him out and how he's loving it. I'm sure I'd get caught gawking at a hottie like Ben too!! Please send me the rest!

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  2. I like it! Especially the way he teases with her. Very nice way to build some tension.

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  3. Ben...*sigh*

    You want to take a picture? LOL! That would be embarassing!

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  4. I love girls who get embarrassed at naked guys and the naked guys who tease them. Ah, so fun! :)

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  5. Hee! I love her awkwardness. It sort of reinforces his general hotness for me-- as in, I believe it because she reacts to it. Great!

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  6. I wouldn't mind taking a pictue ;)

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  7. Ah, I might be blushing a little. I love the girlishness that shows here that none of us ever really lose.

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  8. I don't think I got to read this. But I loved it all the while! I'm blushing just reading it :3

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  9. hehehe the awkwardness. Love it! (And love the story!)

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  10. This is usually not the kind of stuff I read, but I did enjoy reading your snippet, so that's a good thing. Keep it up! Don't give up on the writing.

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  11. This was so cute and real! I totally believed your MC's reaction to him...and he's so confident! Yum. :)

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