Intense! This is a great, heart pounding snippet.
It was amazing.
Another great teaser. Are you participating in the No Kiss Blogfest?
SO INTENSE!I loved it <33Really had my heart pounding like crazy!
I love SM. Cameron just keeps getting more and more evil with every revision.
Wow. I loved this - starting with the little song in the beginning all the way to the end. Very intense.
I love the change to 1st person present!! :) I love the flow of it!Here's some of my favs:Cameron begins humming a familiar children’s tune, then finishes by singing, “Oh, where oh where has that little bitch gone? Oh, where oh where can she be?” ===Makes me hate Cam even more now!!!Oh, and Ben will be taken care of,” says Cameron.====This made my heart jump! I'll have to kill him if he hurts my Ben!!!Cameron casually walks in my direction. He kneels down next to me and says, “This is just a warning. Next time we won’t be so lenient. So, stay away.”====Grrrrrrrrrrr I HATE HATE HATE him! I mean I hated him before, but now I HATE him! As you can tell I LOVE it! Please Miss, can I have some more???Signed:SM #1 fan :)
Oh, damn!!! I'm reading this now, but I always shiver wih how good this book is. Great teaser, Bex!
Very intense scene. I love the freaky humming of the song and how it translates wolfy stuff, lol. Lots of action, and I really had the Conway brothers even more....well, except Ben. He rocks!!
So,so intense and scary. Cameron freaks me out! And I was biting my lip the whole way through.Awesome teaser :)
I love the fight scene - its so vivid and flawlessly done. I'm hooked :)
This was so awesome and intense!! *hates Ethan and Cameron with passion*GRAWR:D
Oh, heck no. Those douches needs to stick it up his butt. But the fight scene was so real! Loved this!
Like the sense of menace here. The bad guys seem so strong that the good guys can't hope to take them on, and that's great for creating tension.
Ugh, bullies. I love the quick flow of the prose and the present tense
Yippee! I'm glad to see this out cause I absolutely adore it! I still love the song he sings - priceless.
Wonderful dialogue and pace! I'm interested :]
Haha, I love the song. The dialogue was awesome. Another great snip, Becca! ^_^
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