I didn't participate last week, because I didn't have anything good to show off. But, now that I had a writing spurt yesterday, I feel more confident. I'm going to post a whole chapter from Logan's perspective, so you can see what I mean when I say it's depressing. Don't fret!! It's a very short chapter. :)
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So very depressing and poignant. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteSmooth and honest. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteAww.. it is sad. But amazingly good! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteBecca, this is great! His thoughts feel real and raw. I definitely want to read more of this!
ReplyDeleteI love TC! :D Logan and Chloe...keep it coming!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat! In a depressing way :( I feel bad for your poor little character.
ReplyDeleteOnce again, I don't think I need to say how much your voice resides with Contemporary. I mean, it's tough always being right, ya know? LOL
ReplyDeleteBut the last line is killer, and I love the description of the house.
Please keeping rocking this one!!!
I agree that it is wonderfully depressing!
ReplyDeleteYAY for spurs of writing!
ReplyDeleteThis is great Becca, wonderfully written :)
I really enjoyed reading it!
This is so depressing and good all at the same time. I heart this novel already, Bex. Great job!
ReplyDelete"False love"? I'm intrigued... you write very well. How is your NaNo going, by the way?
ReplyDeleteHow sad! I almost wanted it to go darker and uglier as he obsesses over the drugs. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteVery real. Nice descriptions. I like!
ReplyDeleteThis is so realistic and heart-wrenching.
ReplyDeleteAmazing job :)
Wow, I could really see everything you described. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow. This is really effective. "pushing the liquid reprieve through my veins" - awesome line! Great tease!
ReplyDeleteFirst off, can I just say ever since Veronica Mars I have been in love with the name Logan...LOL...Sorry you know me *Wink*
ReplyDeleteLoved the snip! The images are great! Flow is Great! Can't wait to see the finished product! :)
Yay, Yay, Yay Becca.
ReplyDeleteExcellent, Dark, Contemp, You rock!!