Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!!

I didn't participate last week, because I didn't have anything good to show off. But, now that I had a writing spurt yesterday, I feel more confident. I'm going to post a whole chapter from Logan's perspective, so you can see what I mean when I say it's depressing. Don't fret!! It's a very short chapter. :)


*SNIP*

18 comments:

  1. So very depressing and poignant. Nice job!

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  2. Aww.. it is sad. But amazingly good! Can't wait to read more!

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  3. Becca, this is great! His thoughts feel real and raw. I definitely want to read more of this!

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  4. I love TC! :D Logan and Chloe...keep it coming!!!

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  5. Great! In a depressing way :( I feel bad for your poor little character.

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  6. Once again, I don't think I need to say how much your voice resides with Contemporary. I mean, it's tough always being right, ya know? LOL

    But the last line is killer, and I love the description of the house.

    Please keeping rocking this one!!!

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  7. I agree that it is wonderfully depressing!

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  8. YAY for spurs of writing!

    This is great Becca, wonderfully written :)

    I really enjoyed reading it!

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  9. This is so depressing and good all at the same time. I heart this novel already, Bex. Great job!

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  10. "False love"? I'm intrigued... you write very well. How is your NaNo going, by the way?

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  11. How sad! I almost wanted it to go darker and uglier as he obsesses over the drugs. Nice work!

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  12. Very real. Nice descriptions. I like!

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  13. This is so realistic and heart-wrenching.

    Amazing job :)

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  14. Wow, I could really see everything you described. Great job!

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  15. Wow. This is really effective. "pushing the liquid reprieve through my veins" - awesome line! Great tease!

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  16. First off, can I just say ever since Veronica Mars I have been in love with the name Logan...LOL...Sorry you know me *Wink*

    Loved the snip! The images are great! Flow is Great! Can't wait to see the finished product! :)

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  17. Yay, Yay, Yay Becca.

    Excellent, Dark, Contemp, You rock!!

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