Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

Okay, I'm doing this a bit differently today. My NaNo project is told in different POV's, soooooo...I'm going to post two short snippets in each. Same scene. Two POV's. Some of you may have already read these. :P

This is the crash. :)

(Flora's POV--she's been drinking.)

*SNIP*

(Laney's POV--she's on her way to her boyfriend's house.)

*SNIP*

12 comments:

  1. WHOA. That was seriously chilling and epic. Would love to read more of this :D

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  2. Holy hell that was intense!
    This is some stellar writing (I wrote killer instead of stellar at first, but then decided that was too much of a pun lol)

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  3. I did read t his! I loved it then I still love it now! ahem, beta rights? :D

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  4. Becca, so glad you teased. This is great - lots can come from it. Very intense.

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  5. I love this novel already, Bex. *tiny squee* The voices are terrific. Great teaser!

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  6. Wow. Just...Wow. You know, I wasn't sure about the same scene from two different perspectives...UNTIL I READ IT. That was really really good. I'm convinced and want to know what happened after!

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  7. I love how awesome and yet different both the voices are!

    Well done :)

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  8. Really love the two scenes from different perspectives... I do that in "Perspective" too! It's fun isn't? Great job, love the different voices!

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  9. Epic Bex!!! This is gonna be a rockin novel---I can tell already! :)

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  10. Great job with the different voices!

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  11. Wow, awesome cliffhanger, quite literally. Or maybe not technically so. At any rate, I really enjoyed it!

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