Monday, November 23, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

Okay, I know it's a day early, but the early bird catches the worm. ;)

Dream from SM:



*SNIP*
Thanks for stopping by! :)

18 comments:

  1. OOH, I love this...what great descriptions and imagery...I love the last line about the swirling vortex.

    Awesome! Keep it coming for SM!

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  2. I love your dream sequences in SM--the imagery is awesome! Well done!

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  3. Excellent imagery!! I love the part about the green and white dots freckling the vision and the swirling vortex of memories. Wow. I can almost FEEL her suffocating!

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  4. wow! At first I thought it was a nice dream but I sure was wrong!

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  5. OH, I like this! I can see her falling with her hair flying up and then just freezing. And I also love the green and white dots freckle... I love SM!

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  6. OMG Becca!
    Love the imagery. The green & white dots=amazing. And the vortex of bright colors.
    And the whole thing.

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  7. Wow, bizarre & creepy dream. And who's the mystery man?

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  8. WOW! Wonderfully written :)

    Really loved the prose, totally hooked me.

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  9. I love this. I can see everything you're describing and it's all pulled together so nice and clean.

    Great job!

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  10. I like how in the very beginning of the passage, I thought it was kind of sexy, and then it turns scary.

    I love, "Green and white dots freckle my eyesight."

    I've tried to describe suffocation before, and it's hard! You nailed it.

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  11. You did great with the imagery and short sentences when she was choking. Loved it!

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  12. Wow, you're awesome at writing dreams!

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  13. Your dream sequences are really amazing! Great imagery!

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  14. Really amazing, unique descriptions! Loved "green and white dots freckle my eyesight." Green with jealousy wishing I'd thought of that line.

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  15. Nice - very creepy. I love the grip he has on her, his strength vs hers.

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  16. Who's he?!!? Better not be my boyfriend Ben LOL!!! Because he's to perfect to do something like that. LOL

    Great snip :)

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  17. Great description! I want to read more :)

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