Whoa! Tense scene, very dramatic. And the last line rocks! Great job!
You are very mean. (Said with love!)I enjoyed it:)
AUGH! Loved it!!! Is this from Silver Moon? Can't wait to read more!!!
OMG! Amazing! EEK I want to know more! Great job :)
Great villian! And actions scenes rock. Nice job!
Great action sequence! Oh my god the last line made me fall of my chair...
Great tease, love the action!! I can't wait to know what happens!!
!!!!!That's basically all I have to say.
I'm hooked. :DKept me at the edge of my seat wondering what'll happen next.
Awesome, Becca! Which novel is this? If this is an example of your first person, then you definitely need to switch ME over. :)
Wow, I need to know what happens next! Great teaser :D
ooh, are you going to continue next week?
Great action scene!
Awesome cliffhanger! The good thing about being 2 days late to read this is that I only have to wait 5 more days to read the rest of this scene -- unless you tease something else next week, of course. At any rate, well done!
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