Oooh, I want to know what she does! You tease! :) And I love the line about "menacing laughter behind his eyes." Great visuals, too--I totally pictured the diner and the way he was sitting in the booth.
Brilliant! Really made me feel like I was inside Candra's head, relaly hating this guy.
"The place has a Grease vibe to it—checkerboard floors, red booths, and a jukebox against the wall."Great description! And werewolf conflict over territory is always nice ;D.
I LOVE this, especially the interaction between the MC and the boy!
This is great! I love her promise for vengeance!
I would love to know what she does to get even! Nice tease~
Great cliffhanger! You really managed to make me dislike that boy in just a few short paragraphs. Great characterization!
Wow, nice! I'm actually really liking Ethan/Cameron... in that hateful way. ;) Love the last line!
I haven't read a Silver Moon snippet in forever! It makes me so so happy!:D:D
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