Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

Oh, yeah, that's right--I said I'd stop doing these. Well, I guess that means I'm backkkkkkk. :)

Here's a snippet from the re-write of Silver Moon:


*SNIP*

11 comments:

  1. Awesome snip, Becca. There's a lot of subtle hints in this, and I love it in first person present. Great job. :)

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  2. Howling dog? Sure... :D

    Only part that tripped me was 'She smiles at me'. Yet it said she ignored the PoV character right before that.

    Other than that, I love it.

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  3. Ack! Thanks. I meant for her to say something about ignoring the question. Oops. :) Changed it!

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  4. Yay, glad you decided to post teasers again:) I enjoyed it!

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  5. lol, Actually I was making a lame joke about it being a werewolf.

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  6. Oh, I knew that part silly! I changed the part about her smiling, because she ignored just prior. :P

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  7. "It takes two." So true! Spooky ending, I love it!

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  8. Well done! I love mysterious houses. And those last two lines you throw in about the dog were great: unexpected, intriguing, very descriptive.

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  9. Becca,
    I love how this is turning out in 1st present! *Is SM #1* I heart Ben!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

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  10. I got the chills at the last part! I usually don't like that, but this was a good kind of spooky. Can't wait to read more!

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