omg! you tease!hehe, lol I loved this! I love when they realize they have feelings for their LI.
Oh wow. I love reading about these two. It's obvious Dom is starting to care for her too, but he's still so sarcastic. Love it!
This had such good tension in the description coupled with her internal thoughts. Wow! My heart started beating faster the more I read!!
Nice eye for detail. I really like the line that goes, "... like someone poured a thick, gooey liquid into her veins." Keep it up!
Dom closed his eyes and grinned. “Definitely not sleeping.”LOL! Literally made me laugh out loud!
Haha nice. I bet she feels like a creep!
Dom closed his eyes and grinned. “Definitely not sleeping.”LOL!! I LOVE Dom! And Kearly's thoughts are so funny.
AUGHGHGH! I loved this, and I loved the last line! He's such a stud, isn't he!! I can't wait to read more!!!
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