Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

Snippet from Mind's Eye. I think I'm liking the relationship between Kearly and Dom. :)



*SNIP*

13 comments:

  1. I'm liking the banter between these two characters, and the voice is strong. Good job!

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  2. I like Dom and Kearly - I also want to know what the deal is w/Ryan!

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  3. I love the last line! "Don't be nosy!" I have to agree it's a strong voice.

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  4. Haha, I agree. The dialogue between Dom and Kearly is hilarious.

    The last line made me laugh.

    Keep writing!

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  5. LOL, this is awesome, Becca! :D

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  6. The dialogue is awesome!
    Great work!

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  7. I love, love, love Dom. The spark between your characters is awesome, and I always smile when I read their conversations. I can't wait for you to finish so I can read the entire novel! Great job!

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  8. Yay, Dom's back! Kearly's so snarky. Love her ;)

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  9. Snark snark snark!

    Kearly is so funny. I don't know how Dom puts up with her. ;-)

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  10. I love Kearly's spunk! I remember your earlier snips and she has a great voice! Can't wait to read it :)

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  11. Still waiting for more Kearly/Dom romance. Come on, Becca! You know you want to post it for your loyal followers :D

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  12. Very interesting idea with the imagination thing. I would def read more of this!

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