I'm liking the banter between these two characters, and the voice is strong. Good job!
I like Dom and Kearly - I also want to know what the deal is w/Ryan!
I love the last line! "Don't be nosy!" I have to agree it's a strong voice.
Love the voice. As usual. :)
Haha, I agree. The dialogue between Dom and Kearly is hilarious. The last line made me laugh. Keep writing!
LOL, this is awesome, Becca! :D
The dialogue is awesome!Great work!
I love, love, love Dom. The spark between your characters is awesome, and I always smile when I read their conversations. I can't wait for you to finish so I can read the entire novel! Great job!
Yay, Dom's back! Kearly's so snarky. Love her ;)
Snark snark snark!Kearly is so funny. I don't know how Dom puts up with her. ;-)
I love Kearly's spunk! I remember your earlier snips and she has a great voice! Can't wait to read it :)
Still waiting for more Kearly/Dom romance. Come on, Becca! You know you want to post it for your loyal followers :D
Very interesting idea with the imagination thing. I would def read more of this!
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