OH NO! Reassigned?
Awesome teaser:)Definitely makes me want to see more!
Whoa there! Yeah, your characters did rebel, didn't they?
Oh no! Hope she gets him back! Great snippet.
No, where's Dom?! I loved him so much! I hate it when characters rebel - revolution is always hard on the mind, lol. :)
Becca! No! WTF? Dom can not reassigned! You tell your characters that you're boss and bring Dom back. But anyways, this was a great snippet. Keep writing :)
oh no, I liked Dom (for some reason I alway picture him as vin desiel***cuz his name was Dom in fast&Furious) I hope he comes back :( Great post Becca I have loved every snippit so far :)
Damn girl! Uber twist!
I like this. I think it will make your story even better and it is a great new element! Good job!
Awwwww! Dom must come back! He can't be reassigned!
Uh-oh...sounds bad! This is tension, baby!
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