Nice! I like how her reactions are realistic - she's not a stupid girl who's like, "Oh, look, this dude knows me! It must be part of my mystical past!" :)
"Had he preyed on other innocent girls before? Was that his hobby?" I really shouldn't have laughed at this, but I did. I love how you word things. Great job, I love it!
OOOOOHHHH! Freaky! i like the suspense, and I like the weird dude....I really want to know what happens next!
ReplyDeleteCool teaser!
I like this part and even tho I know what happens next it's still creepy.
ReplyDelete*chills* Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteWhoa! So is Silver and Black moon partially horror/thriller, or strict urban fantasy?
ReplyDeleteI write mostly horror in poems and short fiction, but I think SM and BM are a little bit of both. I just classify them as urban fantasy. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome...must beta-read faster to get to that part LOL! Great Job, u know I love Candra
ReplyDeleteNice! I like how her reactions are realistic - she's not a stupid girl who's like, "Oh, look, this dude knows me! It must be part of my mystical past!" :)
ReplyDeleteLOVE it! Must read the rest. Seriously. Great job, Becca.
ReplyDelete"Had he preyed on other innocent girls before? Was that his hobby?"
ReplyDeleteI really shouldn't have laughed at this, but I did. I love how you word things. Great job, I love it!