Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

Here's a snippet of Mind's Eye (the part about cheek bashing will be explained later for those of you who beta):



  1. Must. Know. More. You had me at "Bitch, what's your problem?" This was awesome, Becca. I can't wait to read more!

  2. HAHA, I had to laugh at Steph's comment of "You had me!!"

    I love Kearly's tude'....the part where she laughs her ass off at Jessica was awesome...it also gets me thinking there may be more there.

    Oh Ryan, is he worth fighting over?

    Great teaser!

  3. Oh, cat fight!!! LOL...love the voice!

  4. I'm confused...but it' a good confused. A "I really need to read more" confused so I can know what's going on! Great teaser, loved it!

  5. Jessica....hmmm...

    Kearly cracks me up every time I read one of your snippets!!!

  6. I love your dialogue. It makes me crack up, and also makes me wonder about the two girls and their relationship. Muy Bien!

  7. I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I really want to know what Jessica's up to. It sounds good. I love pageant bitches.

    Sounds like both girls are gonna stir up some trouble...awesome

  8. “You’re damn right it is. Here’s another fact for you—stay away from Ryan. He’s mine. You talk to him, look at him, or even think about him and I’ll have you begging me to ease the pain.”

    Okay...*hangs head* I've almost said that same exact speech in HS to a girl over my psycho-x that all the girls liked....Damn those teenage emotions LOL

    Great job Becca, this is very,very real! Can't wait to Beta :)


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